Stick Girl – A Poem

Stick Girl by N. M. Sirett©
STICK GIRL
on the crest of the hill she rages
head back
jaws wide
screaming
a badly drawn
stick figure
red triangular dress
scribble-rushed
on the crest of the hill she leaks
tear fountains
eyes ragged
flooding
face smudged
stick girl
line-feet
line-legs
on the crest of the hill she’s seen
stick girl
an ill-considered doodle
animating
drawn bad
drawn wrong
paper-bound
shredding
on the crest of the hill she’s heard
heart bleeding
chest hitching
despairing
but to those in the valley below
where life is stilled by snow
no one is so bold
as to be anything but cold
in towns and cities elsewhere
there is no discerning no care
nobody grasps
the things that she rasps
as she rips out her scratchy lead-hair

Tia L
I love this! It’s really quirky & odd & also we can all feel like a forgotten doodle sometimes. Great poem thank you
Sarah Griffin
So sad, beautifully written.
J S
Wow. Stick
Girl!
Wow!